A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
The last pitch had very good feedback. I was told that I kept the watcher's attention, I have a good company, and I was suggested to include selling my products to public schools which was a great idea and I included that in this pitch.
What did you change, based on the feedback?
Well I was in a brighter area (at work, hence my work uniform). I condensed what I said so it was short and powerful. I decided to have a precise fact of 760 million people so it explains my segment more and helps people understand that there are a lot of lefties out there. The next elevator pitch I will be in professional attire instead of my work clothes and probably will be outside in pure daylight.
Hi Nicole,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed how you started with those statistics. It amazed me how many people are left handed. I also like how you listed the products because it allows people to know exactly what you are talking about. My only suggestion is to come up with a name of your products and state it so that investors will remember your product connected with a name. Great elevator pitch!